In Class contributions

Writing #1

My grandmother Adela

She was the best grandmother when she was alive. Also she cooked delicious food. My grandmother always went for a walk in the morning. She worked with children in the house. When she was alive, she studied with me.

            When she was here she looked the best for me. Furthermore, she visited my brother on Saturday. However, she always got love. She was the best woman because she helped a lot of my family. My grandmother went to the beach with me, when she was alive. She always was admirable.

Comment: I cost me a little that I have written that improvements structures of sentences, and know how to use verbs, I have to practice more for better writing.